New zealand heros.

Link to BOTH of my edited poems
Reflection
I feel that I kinda have enjoyed this task because it is awesome and its one of the classes I enjoy the most.
I improved my poems and figurative language, Punctuation, Onomatopeia etc by creating poems and then making art about it.

NZ HEROS

Link to the poem I originally createdLink to edited work
Which language features have I used?

A range of language features that I have used are.
Personification: At precisely 6:30 my alarm clock sprang to life.
Personification: Or opportunity knocked at her door.
Adjectives: He writes meanless letters.
Pronouns: The money was really theirs for the taking.
Adverbs: James coughed loudly to attract her attention.
Alliteration: He writes meaningless letters.

What effect were you wanting to create with your choice of language?
I used personification in my poem because I wanted it to sound like a rhyming poem with personification at the same time.


How Successful have you been?
I reckon I'm pretty successful at the moment because I have been using numerous amounts of language features and trying to use dialog. I think that I could at least have a level four multi structural  for my efforts