I did not know what fortitude meant.
I now know that it means..............
Encourage people in pain to not give up on themselves.
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Monday, 14 October 2019
Thursday, 5 September 2019
New zealand heros.
Link to BOTH of my edited poems
Reflection
I feel that I kinda have enjoyed this task because it is awesome and its one of the classes I enjoy the most.
I improved my poems and figurative language, Punctuation, Onomatopeia etc by creating poems and then making art about it.
Reflection
I feel that I kinda have enjoyed this task because it is awesome and its one of the classes I enjoy the most.
I improved my poems and figurative language, Punctuation, Onomatopeia etc by creating poems and then making art about it.
Monday, 2 September 2019
NZ HEROS
Link to the poem I originally createdLink to edited work
Which language features have I used?
A range of language features that I have used are.
Personification: At precisely 6:30 my alarm clock sprang to life.
Personification: Or opportunity knocked at her door.
Adjectives: He writes meanless letters.
Pronouns: The money was really theirs for the taking.
Adverbs: James coughed loudly to attract her attention.
Alliteration: He writes meaningless letters.
What effect were you wanting to create with your choice of language?
I used personification in my poem because I wanted it to sound like a rhyming poem with personification at the same time.
How Successful have you been?
I reckon I'm pretty successful at the moment because I have been using numerous amounts of language features and trying to use dialog. I think that I could at least have a level four multi structural for my efforts
Which language features have I used?
A range of language features that I have used are.
Personification: At precisely 6:30 my alarm clock sprang to life.
Personification: Or opportunity knocked at her door.
Adjectives: He writes meanless letters.
Pronouns: The money was really theirs for the taking.
Adverbs: James coughed loudly to attract her attention.
Alliteration: He writes meaningless letters.
What effect were you wanting to create with your choice of language?
I used personification in my poem because I wanted it to sound like a rhyming poem with personification at the same time.
How Successful have you been?
I reckon I'm pretty successful at the moment because I have been using numerous amounts of language features and trying to use dialog. I think that I could at least have a level four multi structural for my efforts
Wednesday, 28 August 2019
Post Card
The reason I have a google slide, as well as a google doc, is because it looks more like a postcard on google slides.
You (teachers) can choose which one you like best.
REFLECTION.
My reflection on this assessment is quite alright.
I liked how we got to choose if we wanted it to be on paper or a device.
I just wish that we didn't have so many Ski trip meetings so that we get more than just 35 - 40 minutes so we can give it our best at our own pace.
Morning is here so is New Year's Eve!
Dads Doughey Pancakes and icy cold OJ
I arrived at Nan’s Out of the blue Willow grabs me, Scared as could because Nan is angry because Willows running with the Raro.
We come back with an orange tongue and orange fingers.
Nan’s in the Kitchen Cooking like crazy.
As we set the table. Laying down the patterned tablecloth, Cups, cutlery, and plates.
Gathering our family ready for Karakia.
As I reach over like a starved pig and grab the pot of my Nan’s Famous mashed potato.
Lunch was demolished, Summer, Willow and I took up our plates, just about to walk away Nan Says “Where are you three going there are dishes to do”
Willow, Summer and I Run outside, Throw ourselves over the wooden fence and hide.
Willows Parent’s threw a Bonfire Me Willow and Summer were sitting there talking like Crazy about 2019. My cheeks were like roses because Summer passed around some grapes from the woody vine.
I was about 10 0cklock and we decided to watch youtube, jumped into our uncles' bed and started watching a humorous youtube video.
We almost drifted off and then we heard Loud thumping and running, “Lets Play Spotlight at Nans” We all put warmer clothes on.
We walked down the street to nans and it was Pitch black. We began our game of spotlight.
Summer Screamed and I sprinted like a horse in a race.
Our Papa had set off a firework and it Terrified her.
He said “it’s midnight get home and go to sleep”
Summer and I laughed our way home and Laughed ours was to sleep. To me, its the most special New Year's Eve an 11y/old girl could ask for.
Self-assessment.
I think I'm relational because I have used a clear presentation with many adjectives, alliteration, and many other puntucation.
Thursday, 22 August 2019
Wednesday, 21 August 2019
Tuesday, 6 August 2019
Waka Art
Here is my ugly picture and my Pepeha
I compared the Waka towards my Pepeha because my Waka is "Horouta toku Waka" So I added that onto my work
I compared the Waka towards my Pepeha because my Waka is "Horouta toku Waka" So I added that onto my work
Monday, 5 August 2019
Thursday, 1 August 2019
Paper Planes Task.
Link To My Work.
I did a bit of work on airplanes but most of the gliders.
I have included quite a few images.
Also, I have added a few facts about George Cayley the first person to build a glider.
A few paragraphs about the most important parts of airplanes too.
Also Here is my paper plane
it's an acrobatic plane because of how it was made.
It either flies backward, sideways or flies into people.
My Reflection on this Task.
My reflection was it was very interesting to learn about the history of gliders and airplanes, Also to learn about the history of the scientists and creators of the first Glider ever made.
Self-assessment. I think I am multi structural because I easily got Distracted and I could have been smart and moved but I didn't
Work-wise I actually could have done more because of all the time we hade to complete it.
Peer assessment. Assessor (Olivia)
I think Ava is a Multi Structural because she has completed her reflection, Self Assesment and Peer assessing but however she could have used her time wisely because she could have made this assessment epic.
I did a bit of work on airplanes but most of the gliders.
I have included quite a few images.
Also, I have added a few facts about George Cayley the first person to build a glider.
A few paragraphs about the most important parts of airplanes too.
Also Here is my paper plane
it's an acrobatic plane because of how it was made.
It either flies backward, sideways or flies into people.
My Reflection on this Task.
My reflection was it was very interesting to learn about the history of gliders and airplanes, Also to learn about the history of the scientists and creators of the first Glider ever made.
Self-assessment. I think I am multi structural because I easily got Distracted and I could have been smart and moved but I didn't
Work-wise I actually could have done more because of all the time we hade to complete it.
Peer assessment. Assessor (Olivia)
I think Ava is a Multi Structural because she has completed her reflection, Self Assesment and Peer assessing but however she could have used her time wisely because she could have made this assessment epic.
Tuesday, 30 July 2019
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